Okay you guys I'm having inspirational thought again. It's a mix of the song Misery by Maroon 5 and by the Harry Potter movies; Mysteries. So I'm gonna make the title: Mystery in misery =)
Here it comes:
Going door by door,
Reading page by page,
Can't come any futher,
Further in this Labyrinth
Locked,
Locked and lost,
I don't know where to go,
This is a misery..
A misery,
Of not opening,
A door, or book,
To find out how...
How to escape this Labyrinth,
How to figure out this mystery,
How to unlock every secret,
And leave this place forever...
Okay I like it =). Mystery + Misery + A STORY makes this a good poem I think.=)
Well feel free to comment: YOU CAN BY ANONYMOUS ;) and thanks for reading^^
Byee <3
well, first i thought wow awesome poem, the start is soooooo beautiful, but then it went down a little, still good still good, but not as good as you can i think.
BeantwoordenVerwijderenThanks what would you think I could change? =)
BeantwoordenVerwijderenmaybe other words with the same meaning?
BeantwoordenVerwijdereni'll take a look later
I edited it =)
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