I've written today 2 new poems but discovered something of the poems I made this month.. Except voor "Doel in de les" and "The Quote Poem" are they all about love, not bad but it's all the same and that's kinda boring, though I'll post them and let you say what you think of the poems and if I finally can stop with those "love-poems".
So here is the first one: Touch
It's the touch
The feeling
That gives you love, so much
From every time your heart is beating
When I see you
My heart beats faster
It makes me do what I wanna do
To make you feel
That when we touch
It's love
Written by me at 21-09-'10
And here is the second one: Please
Please, give me the power
The time
The perfect place
To make her feel
The love, everything, I want to give her my all
Written by me at 21-09-'10
Sow you see it, every time love.. Give me please some subjects where I can write about because every time I'm having inspiration it comes out to love.. I don't know why, maybe that's something what I feel the last time much.. Well hope you enjoyed these poems, feel free to critisize;)
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hee hallo. ik heb hetzelfde probleem xd. altijd als ik begin met schrijven dan begin ik met iets anders and it always ends with love. hihi, ik heb geen onderwerpen voor je. sorry ;$ maar je gedichten zijn wel heel mooi < 3
BeantwoordenVerwijderenxoxo
don't stop the love
BeantwoordenVerwijderennever.
lots of love xoxo < 33